Assignment 17A: Elevator Pitch


 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LOTi75BMhw&feature=youtu.be


My feedback included not being completely professional and short and not that detailed. Hopefully this time I have changed that, and I plan my feedback will be more positive.

I changed the amount of time, clothing I was wearing, and detail I have put into my pitch.
Hope you all enjoy!


Comments

  1. KaitlynMarch 16, 2019 at 10:42 PM

    Hi Dylan! For your elevator pitch, I think that you should on work on really getting to know your idea and the details of it because the pitch had a lot of pauses and was choppy. I also think you should still work on being more professional, especially in dress. In addition, I think you should also work on keeping your eyes on the camera, since, in a sense, that would be where your audience would be.

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  2. Agatha RobinsonMarch 18, 2019 at 7:29 PM

    Hi Dylan,
    Good job on your elevator pitch! I liked that you seemed really relaxed during the pitch and your words came off very natural. I also liked that you said you would charge an affordable price because I think that for many customers, the price is a major component. I think you should work on standing still and not fidgeting so much during the pitch.

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