Assignment 22A: Elevator Pitch 3
Here is my Elevator Pitch 3:
Feedback: I need
to get to plan what I am going to say before I say it. I need to work on being
less fidgety and keeping my eyes focused on the camera more.
Improvements: For
this post, I prepared an outline of what to say. I also dressed more professionally
and took my time and focused on standing still and keeping my eyes on the
camera. Hopefully this one will be smoother!
Dylan,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great post. Your pitch was very informative and easy to follow. I believe your product is needed very much. I have owned a boat for most of my life and can attest that repairs and upkeep of boats are incredibly expensive. This product would help many people and would be very successful in my eyes. Your pitch was also really good for the amount of times we have done them and tweaked them.
Hi Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your elevator pitch! You actively applied the constructive criticism to this pitch. Your pitch was a lot more professional and organized, yet still conversational. I also liked that you kept the main points of your elevator pitch the same, you just improved the delivery. Again, great job on this one!